Saturday, August 24, 2013

M's first story

The Bad Bear by M

MOM AND DAD HAD NO FRiENS AND KiDS.  THEN TH[ey] HE[ar]D A LAWD RAR! 

A BEAR jUMPED OUT OF THE BUSHiS. THEY WUHR SO SCARb THAT THEY RAN HOME.

THE END


Somebody is feeling pretty proud today.  Ok, two people.

6 comments:

  1. That's a little sad that mom and dad had no friends. But I guess it's also good because they were attacked by a bear! LOL
    This reminds me of my childhood. I started writing stories like these pretty young too :)
    I love how proud he looks in that picture!

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    1. I wondered where he was going with that no friends bit ;)

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  2. Hah that's so cute! Nice work, Miles! My dad found a drawing I did as a kid where I drew our family as potatoes and he was smaller than my mom-he was very interested in the psychology behind it :) What can I say, a girl loves her mama.

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  3. AW!! He's a writer!! (He totally takes after you!) He does look SO proud!! Adorable!! --Lisa

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